Wednesday, November 11, 2009

The whale, the shark and the dolphin.
by Leanne Audrey Fernandez

Once upon a time, there were three friends. One named Willy the Whale, Eric the Shark and Lacey the Dolphin. They were very best friends. One day, they saw a pirate ship. Eric said, "Lets go see it." Lacey, Eric and Willy went to go see the ship. Willy said, "The ship is very big."

Lacey and Eric saw a dead pirate on the ship. They called Willy to come see. Willy came to see the dead pirate. Lacey said "YUCKS!", because the pirate ship was very smelly. Then Lacey said, lets go play somewhere else.

They were busy playing and didn’t realise that they had swam to a cave opening. A sea monster came out from the cave. They were frightened and swam home. From that day onwards they were careful when they went out to play.

The end .

4 comments:

  1. Hrmmm, now now Leanne, which one of the characters are like you?

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  2. Leanne, Nice story. I am so proud of you. Waiting to read more of your stories.
    Love, Po Po Swee Hoon

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  3. Dead pirates & sea monsters . . .

    Wokay. This story very scary la Madam Leanne.

    - Uncle Bala

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  4. Leanne,this is my umpteenth time trying to post a comment. If I don't succeed I am going to scream.
    Finally I am going to be able to say something.

    Are you going to tell more of Willy, Eric and Lacey's adventures? Can't wait to read more of their adventures.

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